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Waxing and Waning

April 2, 2015

by Elena de Roo

Your face of silver
lights the sky
a perfect plate
of pale moon pie

and if I took
a bite of you
then I’d be full
and you’d be new

Ref: p.275 Ed. Paula Green (2014) A Treasury of NZ poems for children. Illustrated by Jenny Cooper. Random House: Auckland

It’s nice the way Elena de Roo works her pie metaphor through to make sense of the shape of a new vs. full moon. I could never remember which was which when I was little and a poem like this would have helped! It rhymes; it tells a little story; it puns; it uses metaphor; it has a simple rhythm and is totally memorable. Cool poem.

phases of the moonhttp://www.elenaderoo.com/

http://www.storylines.org.nz/Profiles/Profiles+D-H/Elena+de+Roo.html

https://nzpoetrybox.wordpress.com/tag/elena-de-roo/

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